Review of “The unicyclist, the vicar and the paediatrician” Peter and Joe, here is my review of this novel, based on reading the first four chapters. I hope that these comments are helpful in the refinement and editing process. You’ve done a great job so far, so please take these comments with th... view book

Hi Lynn, I really like your references to “it’s not a cure all, but just a beginning.”, and highlighting the important and unique contributions that grandparents can have, they are so different to that of parents. How you write sounds like how you would speak, which I think for the purpose of this b... view book

Hi Missy, had a look at your book and you have a very natural writing style, the plot develops quickly and comes under the category of a "page turner", each part of the story leading on to the next one. The acquarium scene was very descriptive and believable. Just a few comments - I didn't reall... view book

Hi Scott, I've read up to chapter 4, and found it to be very readable, enjoyable and the plot seems to be developing well. Not entirely sure (yet) what the Christian message in this novel will be, but I've got a fair way to go (!!). view book

Just read the first chapter - brilliant opening, moves quickly, characters are believable, and I liked the contrast between Arianna's sadness and then her scream of joy at the end. Looking forward to reading more. Well done. Peter Falscastra - Journey to the King. view book