OMG. :) I love this. It's great! Thank you for backing me and I am backing you because it's good, not just because. :) view book

I grew up riding horses and you have described the little thing having just been born quite well. But then, I see by your picture that you have been around that barn a time or two. Happily backed. view book

I am always up for a reading swap. :) I like the way you write and am backing your book. I do have a couple of minor nits for you. In the opening paragraph, you could eliminate some of the extra words. for example, "I can see a few old empty rusty tin cans, pages of old newspaper, and a solitary... view book

I started reading this because your pitch is just so darn enticing. I think you have a fondness for names that begin with the letter "L" -- much like myself Could be my name. :) I like the story, backed with pleasure, just because. view book

I like this. :) I read chapters 1 and 2 and even though some people would argue that you should save the back story for later in the book, I don't think that it hurts your story at all. It needs just a wee bit of tidying up, grammatically speaking, but other than that, you've woven a great story. Ba... view book