I think the concept is a good one, and I think also that as a complete short story it is too long and as an actual novella it is too short. I like the characters of Lulu and Monkey in fact all of the characters even Yoo Hoo and the three birds are interesting, it strikes me there was a great opportu... view book

Hi Amy I have read your book, and it is interesting but may I point out one or two things that jump out to me, as I presume you are at some point contemplating publishing your work. 1. You mention Dinosaur in the first couple of paragraphs and yet you do not say what sort it is Terradactil, T-Rex ... view book

Hi Nancy, I think your book is uplifting and has a message to share that is sometimes forgotten even amongst Christians, my wife and I recently went through a similar experience of loosing our unborn child and it hurts. I found your writing up lifting and helpful thank you. I wonder if you could h... view book

Hi Bella I have been there and I know what the feelings and emotions are like, even if only in my dreams, but you capture it well. I feel the last comment about the mc from Katie saying it was a bit shallow a tad unfair, I think shows perhaps a little less understanding of tinsel town than her acum... view book

Hi Dee Dee It is clear in your writing that there is much of the spirit of God in your work, and I fair piece of you as well. I hope any statements I make are taken in the spirit of love in which they are sent. As a first book I feel confused as to exactly which genres this falls into. It is an u... view book