Maretha, I read everything that you posted. (At the time I read this there were some technical issues, mostly involving repeated chapters. I trust that this issue will be corrected soon, as it makes reading through a little bit annoying.) This is a delightful children's book, and the kind of book ... view book

Iman, I just read chapter 1. This is very entertaining. I particularly enjoyed her abandoning her mini Cooper in the road. I will read on and comment further, however I wanted to point out a suggestion. I think that you summarize just a little bit too much as she daydreams about the kind of job ... view book

I have only read to Autho 5, but I want to say now that this is lovely. I would definitely want my kids to read this, and that is the highest compliment I can give it. I look forward to reading more, and will give more detailed comments later. Best, Maeve view book

Amy, I read the second story, Stranger in the Night, and I liked it much better. You move faster to plot, and the plight of the vampire is better portrayed. I would suggest you consider spending less time in summary description- by this I mean telling us what clothes are being worn and the colour... view book

Amy, I read about a quarter of the first story, to the scene in the night club. I found that it moves a wee bit too slow for a short story. Indeed, I would find the pace slow even for a full length book. The issue is hook. There is ambiance being built , but it is largely focused in clothing and job... view book