Kaye, I visited your little offering following your invitation to read :) I read a lot on here, although I've not commended for a while on any of the ones I've read, and the reason for this is because I don't feel like it. I like to read for my own pleasure and this is a good site for one to... view book

Cara, thank you for dropping by and I appreciate the little time you spent on my high-fantasy story. I always return a read, but I don't always post my thoughts as a comment. There are sometimes I have little to nothing to say other than that I didn't like something, a choice the other writer ... view book

I reached chapter 8 last night when I sent you the message :) I didn't expect it to flow like that! It was awesome, Paul. You do have the knack for building the necessary horror atmosphere. I think I left 2 chapters, but I will continue to the end shortly. If I were to "criticize" something, tha... view book

About your last chapter. I read it a couple of days ago. This is what I thought: It is clearly a moment of importance in the story and I think it would have evoked stronger feelings if it was given in a more concentrated manner. What I mean is, you try to lead us to the critical point of the accide... view book

Hello T.D. I'm here to tell you I read a small part of your work. I rarely decide to comment on books that I haven't read enough to make me confident of my opinion. I will have to add that children's fiction is definitely out of my reading range... So, I read to the middle of the second chapt... view book