Lisa, Your writing is accomplished and your experience shows. Your descriptions are vivid yet the sentences short and compelling. I appreciate the style and the ease of reading. Best wishes, Catherine, Whirl of the Wheel view book

Dear John I read chapter 28, the Epilogue. Great ending, lots of build up and tension all the way back to Ellie's reuniting with John. Aha . . . and you leave us guessing . . . I really enjoyed reading this, thank you. Lots of luck all the way to the top. Quick notes: 'On the brink of... view book

Hi Tony Very exciting stuff. The storyline is compelling and from what I have read I can see how, using the Old Indian, you have created a mysterious dreamworld pathway between a phenonomen of modern science fiction, and reality. This works really well for me. You write smoothly and with good ... view book

Dear Cara I read The Threat of Death (Michael). This is a compelling series of scenes and keeps me in suspense for what may happen to little Charles. I like the way you present this story and having looked at other chapters as well as this one, I can see you write very well. Backed with best w... view book

Hello Jo I have read Chapter 33, Case Closed, Sunday. This is great writing and I enjoyed it very much. Your prose flows and the dialogue runs equally smoothly. I made a few notes along the way . . . 1. 'Once the doctor had left her . . .' a comma after left perhaps to prevent misreading... view book