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My second submission to this website somehow is stuck at the bottom of this page, entitled: "Whore's Heaven". Again, I am entering it to obtain insightful criticisms to help with my writing career. And, again, I write in a journalistic style presenting my characters developing through the experiences they entertain.
I have removed my first manuscript, "Burnt By The Fire" and sincerely wish to thank those of you who wrote even briefly a critique to help me grow my skill. Please, any who are able to do so, please grant me your opinion on this last offering.
I aspired to be a writer since age nine but life steered me in several other directions to professional careers in education and national politics. Newly widowed and retired, I've returned to my first love. I joined this website to garner feedback on my writing, not to participate in a popularity contest. I trust that comments will be sincere.

favourite books

Wuthering Heights; Poor Girl, Rich Girl, Plato's "Cave"
Jane Eyre; Cicero; Charles Dickenson; Greek & Roman Mythologies; Jonathan Livingston Seagull; Last Rights; products from Edgar Cayce; Chaucer; Gulliver's Travels; The Notebook; Running Head: God of the Gaps; The Pythagorean Science of Numbers; Aristotle; Alfie; Edgar Allen Poe and Edgar Rice; Edna Ferber; several poets among whom are, Longfellow and Langston Hughes.

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I wrote 637 days ago

What a brillian treatise of a surrealistic reality ... or could it be a vital realm we have yet to envision. You are definitely a "Literary Writer" not a "Contemporary Writer" as your words draw images poetically, elevating the drama. I cannot provide any true personal reaction as I feel un qualif... view book

I wrote 643 days ago

I finally got around to reading two chapters of your book and must say that you have an exceptional skill in moving your story along with dialogue so that the reader is not distracted by "telling" and descriptions. I captured a picture in my mind of the woman looking for her son along seedy streets... view book

I wrote 645 days ago

Thanks for your complimentary comments. Like you, I, too, hesitate to critique stories that are outside of my interest and therefore, reading preference. I stay away from spy, intrigue and war works as they are on every turn of the dial and tv airing. So, I'll not waste your time with any attempt... view book

I wrote 653 days ago

I found this short exposition intriguing enough to want to read more. view book

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