Slightly deranged, grumpy women in their mid-thirties? Oh yeah, I can relate to that ;) If the vampires know what’s good for them, they will pack up and run. Some paragraphs could do with a bit of tightening, but it’s a minor point as overall the story flows nicely. The writing is good and mana... view book

Hi, I read through the six chapters you have posted. Overall I think it’s good. The writing improves through the chapters, so it may be worth taking another look at chap.1; you are cramming a lot of critical action/information into it and it comes across as a bit rushed. I enjoyed the multip... view book

This book has ‘no messing around time’. There is a lot of information to take in straight away, which makes it a juicy read. Some of the jumps of scene could be a bit smoother, but it is a minor itch. A good read for a dark and stormy night when the shadows are long and you cannot remember if you ... view book

The writing is very evocative and I felt sucked in from the first line. A good read for anyone. view book

Hi, backed. What I read is tight and punchy, good descriptions too. Best of luck Newtown view book