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I will not be giving any in-depth critiques that I've done in the past for Authonomy writers. Unfortunately for me, the writers I helped with a lot of hard work on my part, including stars and bookshelf, could not find it in their hearts to reciprocate by giving me the same consideration. Therefore, because I'm very dissappointed I've decided not to continue this service.

I love to write and have done so most of my life off and on. Now that I'm retired I can concentrate on finishing my second and third books and start planning the fourth that I've been tossing around in my mind. Should an agent or publisher wish to contact me, you may do so at: wjc210@aol.com

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Instructional books on writing by Evan Marshall and one done by M. Leder, J. Heffron and the Editors of Writers Digest
Most everything by Greg Iles
All of Jane Austen's novels
Georgette Heyer's historical novels
Works by J. K. Rowling
'The Mummy' by Anne Rice

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Speed Trap

Janell Coberly

Rose Bradshaw is on the run from her ex-husband and abusive mother. Can she escape them before they destroy her?


Rose Bradshaw is convinced bad things happen to good people. Suffering the effects of an abusive mother, all she wanted was love and marital bliss. What she got was infidelity and the threat of AIDS. Escaping to California from the East Coast, she seeks a calm and creative life as a writer, until she finds herself involuntarily placed in the middle of a murder investigation. Unintentionally helping Detective Jared Bonneville solve his murder case, life begins to improve, until she’s discovered by her ex-husband, Ronnie Wason and all hell breaks loose. Worse, she finds herself falling for Detective Bonneville. When her ex-husband is murdered and she is framed for the crime, she must help Detective Bonneville find the real killers, before she’s tried for a crime she didn’t commit.


 

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I wrote 438 days ago

Long golden hair is so overused, it's nauseating. Dare to be different. Can bricks tell stories? A faint click came from within what? A brick? Didn't know they clicked. Apparently she's in a dark, narrow, deserted hall way, why would she look about, surely she'd know if someone was near. A warehouse... view book

I wrote 450 days ago

Chapter two: last Alec at bottom of page. I don't know, maybe I'm all wet. I went back and reread it three more times, but I'm still not seeing it in Alec's pov. It seems pretty even. Both characters have there own view of the situtation and both characters put it across clearly. It just doesn't see... view book

I wrote 450 days ago

Read up to chapter five. Looking good. A few cliche's here and there, some misplaced comma's, nothing dreadful. Enjoying these crazy, volatile, women. Best wishes. Janell view book

I wrote 451 days ago

Chapter One: forgot to mention . . . one spot, 'her hand slightly shook." I think that's backward. Vaguely remember reading in grammar book about this. I think it's, 'her hand shook slightly." Maybe, maybe not, check it out. Janell view book

I wrote 451 days ago

Oh boy. I'm hooked. After reading the prologue that did it. I can't wait, have stared (big time), and placed on book shelf immediately. Yeah!!! Another great book to read. Janell view book

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