I like it. I especially like the Archive. I felt the dip into the journal came too quickly; I was just getting to grips with Dr. Mammon when you skipped to the entry. Watch the double shoving aside of objects in the middle of Ch.2. I'd read on in paper form. Good luck with it. Simon. view book

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A delightful opening. I shall enjoy returning to this. I can offer more useful commentry as I get a chance to read on. view book

Cracking first chapter. A hook, a look around, and another hook. Two things bothered me: The weight of the heat need not be “oppressive” as you’ve already told us it was holding everyone down. I’d rather have the old boys word, rather than your dominion. Otherwise, I shall look forward to re... view book