TR, this isn't my genre, but I just wanted to let you know that, unlike one previous reader who left you a lengthy message, I had no difficulty whatever in grasping that the woman was lying on the bed while the man was kneeling over her with one of HIS knees either side of her hips, while HIS hands,... view book

I like the stories, but would like them several levels better if your language wasn't so stiff and unnatural. Normal people use contractions when they're speaking. Yes, you've got some here and there: but you should make them the default. Merino sheep, not Marino; marshmallows, not mashmallows. N... view book

Beautiful, measured, well -written. Will shift something off my shelf and back the book the moment I can. Tiny nitpicks: I'd spell the vehicle as put-put, with a hyphen; makes it clearer. Please spell "all right" as two words, not "alright", which always looks like an uncertain teenager. Th... view book

Backed before I was properly into the second chapter. This is not chick lit: it's many, many steep steps higher. Lucky me with a free day tomorrow so I can read the whole thing at leisure. Will comment further once I've done that. view book

Enjoying this immensely, as a retired TEFLer myself ( London and Thailand), and devoted language-dabbler. No time to read it all tonight as I'm too busy with your WONDERFUL novel. Will comment on both later. view book