Rocky - This book is soooo good. It's chilling. I think you capture your reader right away at the hospital bench. Then you take them on a journey that they can't stop. Stopping to shelf it - must read more. Good luck - Sue view book

Your pitch is very good. I love the description, it is your talent. This story moves along really well and your characters are very interesting. I think this will do well. The first couple of paragraphs were a little confusing until I got in to the story, but that might just be me. I'm putting thi... view book

I really like the way this starts and wish I had time to read the whole thing, but lately I am very short on time. Your story promises to be very good and your style is nice - easy to read. Very happy to back it. Good Luck. view book

I love this! On my shelf! view book

I read the first chapter and liked it. Your writing is tight and flows pretty well. There was a sentance about the dead guy's phone that didn't make much sense to me, but besides that you were able to set the whole thing up in the first chapter and not confuse me with as many charachters as you used... view book