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Except for a few typos & grammar errors I enjoyed reading the first 11 chapters & look forward to more of this story. I particularly enjoy the story being told in first person present narrative as it draws the reader into the story as though he/she is Aurora. Take your time with the rest of the st... view book
You have a good lilting descriptive style in your writing but there is no 'hook' to get a reader interested in getting deeper into it. Most everyone who has been to an airport found it boring and were anxious to get out of it so I feel that is the wrong place to start a potentially good novel. If a ... view book