Very confident writing here. I'd back this for the title alone (No Excuse Bruce) and noted a few other things. IMO it's better to start with the human, not the torpedoes so I'd bring Ch 2 upfront, and in that chapter, change 'artefact's' to artefacts, I think you need a simple plural. Von Toose do... view book

Great short pitch and story line. In Chapter one, the 'what have I done?' sounds corny (realistically, he'd be more worried about getting out on time). In Chapter two, the first line is a bit awkward, try pruning, or paraphrasing. but the prose can be easily polished. Backed. All the best for this o... view book

Nothing beats real life and explosions. Backed with pleasure. nb. 'who's name I can never remember' -typo = whose. view book

Great concept & title. I don't like the present tense, myself, and some of the dialogue feels off, eg 'School's such a waste of time'. Wouldn't kids say 'school sucks'? Still, very immediate & fun. Backed. view book

Definitely an attention-grabber, this one. Not a modern style, but that may well be a plus. Backed. view book