I liked your pitch, and the opening of the story was so unexpected. You write with such an easy going style which is, in turn, both humorous and very descriptive. I love the originality of the story and also it was interesting to see your developomentr as a person once at the camp. I want to see ... view book

This is an unusual story, which at times in the beginning I found hard to follow, but you have described the characters well. The lack of editing is rather distracting but the honesty of the writing shines through. I agree with previous comments that the cover is not very attractive, couldn't you c... view book

I like the up-to-the-minute theme of Social Threatworking. You have a good pitch leading to an equally good prologue. Your short sentences are impressive, as they give an immediate impact. The descriptions are well-drawn and the dialogue is very natural. I am backing you now on what I've read so ... view book

I was interested in your pitch, all those unanswered questions, then read the prologue with still more questions, so felt impelled to continue to find some answers. It promises to be a most intriguing story, and I like your characters, Nick and Paolo are both well-drawn, but I don't find your dialo... view book

I liked your pitch, and the first chapters did not disappoint, but there were some inconsistencies later on. It is, however, obviously written from the heart together with a great deal of medical knowledge, so for that alone I'll back you. Lizilev view book