I can only reiterate what your reviewers have already said, so for the sake of avoiding wasting your time, here's a six word story: Fantastic. Many stars. Deserves Editor's Desk. view book

Howdy. Okay! Time for some critique. Your prologue is fantastic. Brilliant pacing, throwing us right into the action as we see Wrath changing. However, your first chapter... slips. Introducing so many characters at once is an information overload, and I counted /sixteen/ characters introduced al... view book

Jenny, Well, howdy! I gotta say, Taurus is a unique plot that I've yet to see anywhere else. I'm liking the time skip between chapters one and two, as well as the change of tone, froms swords, sorcery and high adventure to a gritty, modern fantasy. A few minor errors here and there, but nothin... view book

Wow. It's not everyday I can't find fault in a novel, especially first person. Foxblood: The Chase had me gripped from the start. With the convincing, well-planned authorial voice of Sophie, and the fantastic characterization, I'm hooked and eager for more. Sadly, time is not on my side, and my cou... view book

Rightio! Uhm, I don't like giving all positive feedback, so expect some harsh crit. Your first chapter is shaky, and I'm not sold on it. There's words that've been mispelled, with either letters missing or just careless typos. Some apostrophes were missing too, now that I think on it. Look throug... view book