Reels you in immediately, well done view book

At last, a book categorised as literary fiction that fits with my idea of the category. For me it's set in an area I love, in an era I can quite happily read and in a style that stretches the mind raising it above run of the mill. If this has already been self ublished please point me in the direc... view book

Hi there, reads fluently and would appeal to the YA market as well. I love the start paragraph, just what's required to keep you reading. Best of luck with it view book

Hi there, I like the pitch on this one but it needs review of the spelling and grammar in places eg junk mails, in the UK we would refer to junk mail even if more than one. That may not be the case elsewhere. The descriptions are great but the dialogue is a bit stilted. Best of luck with it. view book

bugger, it's tagged as incomplete, that's not fair! I feel like a child whose destitute mother took it into a sweetshop. Pack it in and get writing the rest. view book