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I just love to write. I hope you don't mind my book is only half done.
I was originally Former Model but I couldn't log in again. Then I tried to register as Dancer but Firefox shut down the computer in the middle for an update. When I tried again, dancer was taken. LOL. Anyway, ignore Formal Model, she can't do anything. But I can.

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Anything by Agatha Christie

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The Big Bamboo

The Countess

Learning their husbands have been going on dear hunting instead of deer hunting trips, Robin and Carly take a Caribbean hunting trip of their own.


Have Boyd and Walter been searching for dears instead of deer on their so-called hunting expeditions. With visits to places like Las Vegas, running up huge bills for 'special services' while they were supposedly hunting and fishing, Robin and Carly sure think so. Divorce? Maybe…no probably.
With the enormity of their husbands’ numerous infidelities weighing heavily on their minds, Robin and Carly decide to get away…to think and…
After convincing their husbands that they should take separate vacations from the women, Robin and Carly head to the Caribbean Basin. The Dominican Republic is the first stop on their planned Caribbean adventure---the lands of deep blue lagoons, never-ending topless beaches, cool summer breezes and handsome, swarthy men, eager to fulfill their every wish.

 

Achilles 42

The Countess

A double murder, a brutal sacrifice and a headless corpse leads two pairs or detectives on a chase which points to an organized government conspiracy.


A Las Vegas husband and wife are assassinated, shot to death on their front lawn. Then a young woman is found murdered violently almost ritually in a Las Vegas hotel room, while three days earlier, on the East coast, a headless corpse is dragged out of the Potomac River just south of Washington DC. The D.C.detectives eventually find out the victim is an intelligence analyst for the CIA. Days go by before the Las Vegas and DC detectives realize their respective cases are connected and a serial murderer assassin is on the loose and much, much more.

 

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I wrote 1123 days ago

Hi Gina, Thanks for your comments, I've been kind of ignoring the site for a few days while I finished another ms. I should be able to get back now and take a gander at your read, too. The chips were laid across her eyes. The CSI people removed them for safekeeping before Eddie and M.E. arrived.... view book

I wrote 1134 days ago

I love it, I love it. After I cull some of my obligations down and find some precious time, I will be back. In the meantime the little I have read of your fine book has convinced me to shelve it view book

I wrote 1134 days ago

While I think you have the makings of a good story, I felt you tended to be too verbose, with too many unnecessary words. I also was confused by the mentioning of all the characters--just names-- and places. Nothing a reader could sink their teeth into. Here are some notes I made to myself on yo... view book

I wrote 1135 days ago

Hey Pete, Yes, It's implausable but guess what? The only true thing about this story is the guy's murder on the front lawn. Oh yeah, the underground pot farm mentioned in the next chapter is also true. Based upon what Tom said I have trimmed some more sentences and I think I'm about trimmed ... view book

I wrote 1140 days ago

Hello Richard, The good news is I like your story. The bad news is I found way too many silly errors to back you at this time. Too many to even mention. The prologue seemed to be fine then we got into Chapter One and I found error after error. Go back over this chapter and the next thoroughly, make ... view book

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