This is not my genre - Though this must have been a work of love..? Very well crafted; the biblical knowledge of the author makes the flow natural, but the reader does have to turn the pages; manually - A very heavy, deep title; making the read difficult to digest, as there is too much informatio... view book

Your Pitch is; "Pitch Perfect!" This has been written with a talented pen. The flow eases the reader in to the story, though the tempo does keep the pages turning, which is good. This is a tangled, addictive title, that is a must for everyone! Your audience following will be huge. Wis... view book

Your Pitch could do with some work; and a few more sentances. The reader is eased in to the story, the flow is easy and comfortable. The short chapters, keep things simple. You have a natural pen. Added to my WL - This title interests me... Keep up the good work! stevew The Ultimate/... view book

This is a very enjoyable read, which asks many questions... I'm not sure if this genre is a popular one; though it's a new slant, that will temp many readers, and may generate a mass audience if marketed correctly. This title has been written with an educated pen, and with a very pleasing flow... view book

This is a thrill... of a treat... of a read... WOW! The Oktober Projekt has been written by a very talented pen - The flow is perfect, and keeps the read exciting. A very addictive title, that will attract a mass fan base for the author. Easily BACKED! stevew The Ultimate/The Authors Cu... view book