This is brilliant, just Brilliant! I have no intentions of telling you how good you are as a writer, as it goes without saying. Pace, setting, characters, and dialogue are all so realistic that this should instantly be recognised as Thee best book on the site. Shelved with pleasure. Frank Isla... view book

Hi John, this story is absolutely gripping. You have a special voice which delivers such a clear picture of the events, it is so easy to feel part of this book. I do wish you had given a deeper insight into the character Joan as I feel slightly at a loss to her age. She is obviously Sean and Bernade... view book

Hello Helena, I'm mighty impressed by the way you have captured every day household items and brought them to life. A very creative imagination indead. Not only is your writing clear and to the point, it shows action taking place and the dialogue is authentic. Conflict in all the right places and a ... view book

This is class! You have a natural talent for bringing a story to life. Simple yet full of charm with a pace that draws the reader along. Great attention to detail. Brilliant characters. Nice tight writing. And a must read plot. Shelved Frank Island 42 view book

Hey there Frank. I like the way this is shaping up into a right good page turner. You create very life like characters and deliver the writing in plain evenly constructed sentences. Nice even pace which draws the reader in from the very first words. Have just reached the end of chapter two and getti... view book