Backed with pleasure, CJS. No need to leave a comment since we've been chatting writing on the forums. This is an incredibly intriguing premise, best of luck with it. view book

Catherine, you've proved you can tell a gripping story and you've engaged a lot of readers, so well done with that. On the flip side, a few observations - Highlight all your as he/as she sentences. There are a lot and it can give the prose a tendency to run on. Likewise all the sentences where ... view book

Backed your book. Very entertaining read. On the flip side, take a look at your use of was. You could perhaps lose a few and make the prose more dynamic and immediate. Seems a shame to remove the reader a step away from such colourful characters by overuse of passive verbs when you can engage them ... view book

Backed after reading the first story. Only bit I'd change is the nurse being exactly what I expected her to be in this kind of story. Hard to know what wouldn't be a cliche in this kind of situation as the old scary battleaxe matron would have been just as much of one. Good writing, though, best o... view book

Hard to articulate why I liked this so much. I think I just enjoyed soaking up your beautiful prose and getting lost in the landscape. Shelved and good luck with it. view book