I could have sworn that I already comment on this, Raymond. Only because I remember reading it and becoming enthralled with the story. A Child From The Wishing Well, is one of the best reads on this site. Your character development is amazing and I have actually glanced back at it numerous times ... view book

I only wish more of the story was on here, so that I could read more. I like Maddy's cynacism on the idea of love and your pitch stating that, but, in time, she loses that when she meets and falls in love with Wes. I did see one error in chapter one, the line - "Is that watch you're wearing." Its... view book

I don't agree with a past comment, that women would not appreciate or get the first two paragraphs in chapter two. I thought they were done with excellent descriptive detail, just as the rest of the story. Backed view book

I’ll be honest. I was worried that the story wouldn’t pull me in, because it was about a football player. However, what you have achieved here (even though it’s fiction) is the chance to get into the head of a professional athlete, a chance to understand that although certain people might believe ... view book

Excellent writing. I personally begin to dislike that, Naomi. Each conversation flows so weel, that you can easily lose yourself in the story. Very backed. view book