Excellent. Reminds me of The City of Ember. There’s the whole mystery aspect of what’s outside the city, and also a young girl character that immediately engages the reader. Very well written. view book

I read the first part of Chapter 1, and I like the style. It reminds me of Michael Crichton. There’s a lot of medical/scientific information, but the characters are likable. It’s a nice mix. view book

Awesome. First thing I’ve read that sounds really publishable. view book

A great story that drew me in from the begining. I hope to come back later and read more. view book

Reminds me of a cross between Peter Pan and the Great Good Thing. The transition between chapter 1 and 2 is awesome. I love how it goes from pirate ship to frosted flakes. Reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes comic strips, when he snaps out of a day dream back to reality. Brilliant. view book