Dude, I just ran across this and absolutely had to read it. Being a college student myself, also sharing a house with four or five other people, this just jumped out at me. Now, I can be thankful that my housemates are absolutely nothing like these people. The first chapter is definitely the best... view book

All right, who told you that I liked history? More often than not, history gives you facts and dates and what happened, and we forget that there were real live people involved back then. Stuff like this reminds us that uncertainty, fear, regret aren't recent inventions -- people in past had them t... view book

Hey Crispy, I read over your story and think the science looks fine, at least insofar as one can in a sci-fi novel. I've got to give you props on one major point that a lot of sci-fi writers don't do: details. You told us what all these futuristic techs are, given us a history lesson of sorts (tho... view book

Well, let me just say that I love these kind of stories. Time travel always wreaks havoc with my brain, but they're so much fun, too. I started this one for the YA reading group and ended up reading through the whole thing. I'm guessing that this is the first in a serial-type story and that more ... view book

Karen, I did what you asked and read past chapter 1, all the way to chapter 6. Your style flows, is easy to understand (virtues for a children's book, I would think), and has a story that can be followed without too much trouble. It walks the line well between simple and complicated, and, I think... view book