Mary. I only had to read the first two chapters to know that it ws terrific piece of work and should be published. You draw the reader in from the very first line and keep the interest going. It seems to me though that Howell hasn't progressed very far in cleaning up the place in spite of his broth... view book

I like it You tell it well and Give us an appreciation of what a young girl feels about her abusers. Seemingly small in nature the actions are nevertheless arousing to an abuser and the danger is that they take it one step further at a time until the abuse becomes rape. I am sure that your account... view book

An intriguing and interesting tale. I was a little worried about your description of Bull being old and in his early sixties. I'm 82 and don't consider myself old. The idea of 'hosts' for other beings is not new but you appear to have put a different slant on it by giving the host a lot more say in ... view book

I thought I would just take a read at the first chapter to see what it was like , just finished the 6th and would love to continue but time is pressing. However I will come back and read more. A thoroughly enjoyable read but I must admit I'm a bit worride about Albert and annoyed at Tyson. A great ... view book

Good style but you should break up your paragraphs a lille. I'm not sure about the knife bit. Most of us have been there, loved it and got the tee shirt to prove it. However a couple of points that I think may help. Avoid starting any sentence using words ending in "ly" or "ing. and in the 2nd P... view book