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The Grapes of Wrath, anything written by Jane Austen, even doodles on a napkin, The Lord of the Rings Trilogy, Harry Potter Series, Tom Sawyer, Little Women, mysteries by PD James, Agatha Christie and Elizabeth George
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Jenny, I love how you create tension right off the bat. I'm a sucker for a good space opera (huge Star Trek and BSG fan) and this didn't disappoint. I love the line about the emptiness of space, and still running into things -- isn't that what always happens? LOL! You also fleshed out Dezza, ... view book
Valentina, I'll be back for a longer read soon -- but lovely first chapter! view book
As a net junkie, this had immediate appeal to me. What's got me hooked is the slow build to the mystery with the tantalizing hints you give with the court procedings..."caught red-handed" doing what?! Needs a little proof-read (ex. Chapter 3 "...I didn't think such a person was possible." She ... view book
Kostas, This is beautiful work. I love the culture, the style and the voice. Shelved. Kendra Switch view book
Hi Amber, I just took a look at Unsung Heroes -- love the title by the way. THe paragraph about why she broke up with Eli -- could it be shortened a little? Work those details into a diaglog scene? I know -- I have the same issue in some spots (show v. tell) too. I think that combining ch... view book