Sorry, just give me a minute to wipe my eyes. Fab, absolutely fab! Such great words and arranged so expertly on the page. Brilliant and, needless to say, shelved. view book

Your descriptions are fantastic. I felt like I was at the airport; that's exactly how I feel when I come out looking for my relations! The read is an easy one and you've caught my interest with the first 'hook', so gently tugged. Deservedly shelved. view book

baked beans will never be the same again! an inventive use of something everyday to show the frustrations of the daily lifeof each character. well written with dark humour thrown in, brilliant. view book

You grab the readers attention instantly with the first few lines. Well, that might have just been me - I empathised with the mother straight away. I have to be honest and say the story did remind me of Harry Potter, but it has a more darker feel/edge to it. The story doesn't flow as well in some sp... view book

I'm not used to reading plays but found this easy going and highly entertaining. I like your character names, much more intrigiung than normal ones and make you want to read on to find out why you've used them. A funny, original piece and I wish you luck with it. view book