i swore i already commented on this. anyways, it was a nice read. there was good descriptions, especially when al shatian (sp?) was watching the princess. the premise is straight forward, which is a good thing, and the characters are off to an intriguing start. i like it. view book

the prologue was great and well written. the premise sounds interesting as well. the writing is very clean and crisp, with an edge to it that makes the dark parts stand out. im assuming the boy in the prologue turns out to be the killer, which is good for a prologue - to get some insight to such ... view book

the style of writing here is very professional and concise, characters emotions and expressions are summed up rather neatly in just a few words. your story feels like a fairy tale and would fit well among young women readers, of course that is obviously your target audience. i know that charlotte... view book

like the open. it takes you right in to luke's frustration. the premise reminds me of a john grisham novel - that sort of intrigue and suspense . i also found it unique that there was no dialogue in the first chapter, its all description. your writing style is very fitting for the story you are... view book

hi bob, sorry about the late read. i was almost certain i reviewed this book, but sometimes this site freezes on my comp and doesnt update. ill certainly give this a read and post a review very soon. view book