This is brilliant! Your discriptions are en pointe, and your sense of dry wit is given in the appropriate dosage for your tale. The German bit threw me off for a moment, and it perhaps interrupts the flow...however, that could just be me. I rather enjoyed this, and will certainly be returning for mo... view book

It seems that you have most of the same problems that I do. I had a difficult time telling when this was, and am still a little confused (however that could just be a flaw in myself). The part where Colin barked "No!" 'flushing out his throat, pinging the sound off the walls' felt awkward to me; lik... view book

While this is not a genre that I would usually read, I quite enjoyed the first few chapters. Especially the titles...I'm no good at titles. Usually I feel that "chapter titles" take away from the book, however yours work wonderfully! Good show! I actually look forward to reading more of this and it ... view book

I've only read the first few chapters, but I am quite interested in what happens next. Chelsea is a wonderful character and I enjoy reading her. She reminds me a bit of me. haha. And I think that's awesome when a reader can identify with characters on some level. Because that means that your work is... view book