I didn't mind the first chapter like others. I thought it was different, but I can see where others are coming from. I guess it's a taste issue. In either case, your characters are unique, pop-off the page and the writing is very witty and smooth flowing. This is definitely like a teen titans bu... view book

Daniel-wow. Talk about sucking the reader in. And talk about a string of horrible luck. Man, this is good stuff. First off, the guy talks about leaving his wife and kids, then about how he won the lottery but forgot to play the numbers-OUCH! That seriously made me sick, just thinking about it. ... view book

Hey Robert. You have the making of a very good thriller here, especially with Pfiser and their 2.3 billion dollar fine for giving perks to doctors. This starts with a bang-a medical student finding her lab partner/sexual friend dead in the lab. Then we meet Charolette who's father is a senator an... view book

Hey Sean. The opening is pretty creepy if you think about it-a child sitting on a bench with some shadowy woman who later disappears and then he states that the woman is his friend. So a good opener, and then to go into his past, where his father took him to the movies and how his parents died was... view book

Hey Bob. This starts off like an everyday life of a broker. Then, only at the end, do we, the reader, realize that his actions, to net a bunch of money, was controlled by a chip in his head. In the second chapter, we peek in on Peter's life, a disgruntled photographer, who at the end of the scene... view book