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Thanks to everyone who had a read of my MS. I've had a number of thoughtful comments that have enabled me to make some useful changes.

I live in London, England, and have been writing on and off for a few years.

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Catch-22
Animal Farm
To Kill A Mockingbird
Two Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest?
Great Expectation
The HitchHiker's Guide to the Galaxy

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I wrote 572 days ago

Hi William, I enjoyed the ominous feel of the opening and thought your description of the mother’s accident and daughter’s reaction was chillingly good. Also, connecting the first two chapters through the Kestrel was clever. I'd personally prefer a little more dialogue in the opening chapters. ... view book

I wrote 575 days ago

Hi Shalini, I thought 'A Shirtful of Frogs' was a great read: the narrative acquires a unique personality from the opening and you seem to bring scenes to life very easily. Just a couple of thoughts: I thought the 'cheeky, chirpy, cockney-speak' in the opening was a little ott and was gl... view book

I wrote 578 days ago

Hi Tina, I thought your style of writing was charming and engaging. Nothing read awkwardly- which is impressive for a period narrative. Noel view book

I wrote 579 days ago

Hi Richard, An entertaining and enjoyable read. I dipped into several chapters and was smiling or smirking in lots of different places: toast and (Cooper’s) marmalade to Marigolds to Marigold’s hand; Yoko the surrogate strangled rabbit; the masonigynistic opening gambit. My only comment wou... view book

I wrote 585 days ago

Hi Greg, Lots of enjoyable humour and incisive comments on some of the foibles of human nature. Jona strikes me as a candidate for Nietzsche's 'other' Zarathustra: more world-weary and therefore more wise. Noel view book

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