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PAB40

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London based, Sunday writer...my writing has not seen the light of day, so I'm happy to hear any feedback.

Keen to exchange criticism, will read lit. fiction, crime/thrillers, historical, high concept sci-fi...but tend to avoid fantasy, YA and religious.

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Ellroy's LA quartet
Micheal Moorcock's Pyatt quartet
Dickens' Bleak House
All of James Lee Burke
Fowles' The Magus
Conrad
Zola, Flaubert
Maugham's Of Human Bondage
Frisch - I'm not Stiller
Greene's Honorary Consul, Human Factor
John Le Carre - Smiley books

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The Pioneer

Philip Berry

"Everything good that I did was down to him; his influence, his creativity - his telepathy. I was his greatest experiment."


Oliver Trent, a young traveller, fires a gun in the deserted city of old Pompeii. Thomas Kealy, the man he met only days before, waits in the gloom, confident that he will not be hurt. He has persuaded Oliver to shoot him, as an experiment in influence. Oliver is sceptical, but plays along; he pretends.  Then anger overcomes him...then happiness, then fear. He is confused. He pulls the trigger.

Thomas reels - but he is triumphant. In situations of intensity he really can change the way people feel. He is telepathic.
 
So begins an unequal friendship – Oliver, the awestruck traveller, who devotes himself to recording a life of great significance…and Thomas, the Pioneer. As Thomas ages prematurely, wasted by his talent, he seeks to prove that he is not alone.
 
The traces of pioneers past and present are revealed, across centuries and continents.  But Thomas cannot find the community of telepaths that he knows must exist.  The one constant in his life is Oliver…but he too has a history, and his mind is unquiet.

 

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Adeel wrote 61 days ago

Dear Sir I will be thankful to you if you can render me your support ....

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Will you fight for CUPID (god of sexual love) leading men or for LIBE....

Wanttobeawriter wrote 79 days ago

PAB40, I commented on and backed Pioneer over two months ago. Wonder....

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Hello fellow Authors and readers. I was sitting here trying to think ....

Jack Cerro wrote 102 days ago

I am Jack failure to follow his own 6th commandment. 1: Thou shalt....

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I wrote 165 days ago

Thanks Chris, I may need to explain the experiment a bit more...it does seem OTT so I have to convince readers there was no other option. Appreciate your comment, and will work on clarity...a few people have brought that up. Phil view book

I wrote 166 days ago

Hi there, This certainly has a voice of it's own. It's original and relevant and the parallels drawn between here and the US give it a great slant. I like the tricky title and would definitely pull this off the shelf in a shop to try. The language and the humour carried me along, and there are la... view book

I wrote 167 days ago

And by the way, if you read books you're qualified to give criticism as far as I'm concerned! view book

I wrote 167 days ago

All points well taken Stacey. The pitch needs clarification, plus some POV issues. Appreciate your attention and understand your reservations. Phil ---- Philip - a return read, and I apologise for the time it’s taken me. Pitches: a little confusing, if I’m honest, mostly due to the char... view book

I wrote 169 days ago

Orma, Crystal Child manages to decsribe what would really happen if a family became aware that their young girl was clairvoyant. By portraying the human reaction - disbelief, frustration, gradual realisation, protectiveness, anger at those who cannot accept them - you manage to build a believable do... view book

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