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All things change. Spring has brought me great unexpected change.

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contact me at: bartzisandrew@yahoo.com



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favourite books

Enders Game- Orsan Scott Card
Black heart- Eric v lustbader
Rules of engagment- Joe weber
The eye of the world- Robert Jordan- rip
Aliens vs Predator- the whole series
Hemingway's notebook- Bill Granger
The Wingman series- Mack Malloy
Armor - John Steakley
First Man of Rome- Colleen McCullough
Dune- Frank Herbert

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Hullo there, Andrew. I'm still a reader on this site scouting for new....

Meg Wearing wrote 341 days ago

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I wrote 538 days ago

Review: Faeyte the first 2 chapters are flawless, engrossed immediately with style and format of dialog. Chapter 2 you call it the kings police force... I bet you could be more creative than kings police force. First paragraph chapter3-- groggily. It's a cumbersome word. Not a fan of it. ... view book

I wrote 548 days ago

OMG THIS IS AWSOME BACKED view book

I wrote 549 days ago

Review 1st chapter The Lokana Chronicles 1)the math 78k words divided by 250 words per page =313 .. 11 chapters =28 pages per chapter average. Separate chapters thin some down for Authonomites. It may work for a book, but Authonomy is different. Imo 2)your characters have a lot to say. You writ... view book

I wrote 549 days ago

First thing first your average chapter is 1700 words. Math = 83k words posted in 48 chapters = average chapter 1700 Way to short. Maybe it's due to authonomy not sizing your text correctly. Check to see if you have 1” margins and 12font size. Make the chapter size reflect a real book. I... view book

I wrote 549 days ago

Review: Taurus chapter 1 and 2 you have the word craft of your world down pat. I had no problems believing your dialog. I enjoyed the battle scene early in the story. Your transition lines and new scene intros are well crafted. There is no split in story or action I see an immediate story ... view book

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