Realistic and convincing view book

Interesting and convincing story of a tumultuous change in circumstances. Chapters 2 & 3 are the same. Needs some work on the tenses and there are some strange sentences such as "Of MIce and Men, we were still reading." It keeping the readers attention will depend on how the experience changes ... view book

Interesting premise, tension from the start let down by the formatting. Also could do with some editing to improve the flow, e.g 'the older couple usually was in bed early' - the older couple were usually in bed early / usually the older couple went to bed quite early / etc view book

I liked the idea of the frustrated boy who didn't know what he wanted suddenly thrust into a fantastical world. Why does he need to go back the first time? It adds nothing to the story and removes the question of whether he can return. Some of the conversations feel a bit baggy and would benefit... view book

Interesting story, fascinating insight into the world of flipping. Reads like non-fiction, factual and a lot of detail. view book