Hi, Just found your comments. Thanks for taking the time. The story becomes less demanding the farther along you get. The writing becomes less "ornate" and the pace picks up. The references to Paradise Lost become vaguer as the crime story takes over but the ending brings it all together. And o... view book

Hi, Just found your comments. Thanks for taking the time. The story becomes less demanding the farther along you get. The writing becomes less "ornate" and the pace picks up. The references to Paradise Lost become vaguer as the crime story takes over but the ending brings it all together. And o... view book

Hi, Had a chance to read some of your book. You asked for comments, so here goes. i.e. The “damaged” body is found “washed up on the banks of Hebden Waters” which I assume is a river. What was the damage? How caused, if death is deemed accidental? i.e.“His heart was beating fast. He was a... view book

Hi, I read most of Ch 1 and excerpts from Ch 5,9,13,16 to see how your writing changed. You have a easy, sophomoric style that suits the subject matter. Apparently what you are saying is more important than how you say it. I saw some juvenile "folly" but must have missed the "madness". If this i... view book

Well written. Worth backing and worthy of HC review. Good luck. Rand view book