This is so slick - and warm, witty and perceptive. I've only read ch1 and it was flawless. Seriously well done! view book

Pitch - 1st thoughts...this sounds fresh, funny & appealing. In the mould of 'Salmon fishing in the Yemen'. ch1 - '...he sketched out a quick cock..' - I'd drop 'quick' but this is lovely detail. Too many would tell us just how bored/distracted he was, probably in some detail, but you've ca... view book

ch1 - fantastic opening with the WLTM ads. And I instantly liked the motley crew in the class - the teacher, the fat guy etc etc. Oh & this is a v.light, refreshing read - I'm liking this a lot. ch2 - As for the MC's writing - it's tricky... I dont know if you're deliberately trying to... view book

1st thoughts...the story is genuinely *novel* - which is always refreshing. 2nd thought - 75 chapters - bloody hell!! ch1 - I loved parts 1 & 2 (& their connection with the powder) - though part 3 seemed more loosely related & thus left me scratching my head a little. ch2 - Are you sure Far... view book

1st thought - it's the Incredible Hulk!! Synopsis - it's got all the elements for successful YA: teens coming to terms with difficulties which others cannot relate to. An evil honcho to focus everyone's emnity. Bodily adjustments...I'm tempted to back before reading even the 1st pg!! (only joking... view book