This is good, first person, internal issue stuff, but you need to make it tighter, Benjamin. If this guy is really using hunting elk as a way to come to grips with the death of his son, then you don't need so much description. For me, it takes away from whatever is going on internally. It confuse... view book

The title is awesome. I do like the synopsis. The idea of the book is very good and I'm backing it because i have no issues with the writing, but I feel sort of cheated. I mean, I was expecting something a bit more literary based on your synopsis, but I can't really call this literature. It's mo... view book

Sly, your work certainly crackles. It reads very quickly and is sort of "modern pulp". Good work for the genre. view book

Fascinating... view book

Ian, you're a terrific writer. This is very, very good stuff! I'm impressed! The only thing I would suggest is that you find an editor who really knows you well, my friend. I hate to write this, but it's almost too literary for the public. I know..that's the world we live in now. Get an editor... view book