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lbrammer1992

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Since childhood i have always had my head in a book. I love literature in several forms and my favouite types are conspiracy and action. After seventeen years of reading I decided to start writing novels, finally after a years work on my novel the Sacred Pool I finally finished it after my 18th birthday and decided to upload it to see what happened. The novel is a conspiracy/ action story and feedback would be greatly appreciated. I'm from the steel city of Sheffield and am currently studing for the final year of my A levels as well as writing on the side. An honest opinion would be appreciated about my book.

I am currently involved in a re-write of some sections and will upload them when they are completed which means that if you do give me a tip to improve my work I have acknowledged it and changed it on the documennt but not uploaded it.

I will gladly read anything people ask me to read but please do leave me a message or a comment as I am likely to forget.

Like everyone else on here I would love to get published but I'm pragmatic enough to realise that it will probably take more than the first novel to get a contract but I want to remain optimistic for my first

With the great response I have already recieved on here I've been working on a second novel which will be titled "The Death of History" but at the moment it isn't good enough to upload

Many thanks to Joe Mercer for the cover art, incidently his book Blackwater is a great read and well worth backing

favourite books

Dan Brown- angels and demons
Chris Kuzneski- sign of the cross
Sam Bourne- the righteous men
Clive Cussler- sahara

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The Sacred Pool

Laurence Brammer

When a mysterious stone is discovered in a Peruvian archaeological site nobody could perceive the power lurking within or the damage it could cause.


In AD 290 Roman legions consume a Celtic village and steal a group of twelve stones. On the way back to Rome they are attacked and the stones are scattered.

After centuries unmenttioned the Lucian stones had become myth but that was until one of the elusive stones was found in an archaeological dig site in Peru. Professor Barnes was called in to verify the discovery but from that moment he is embroiled in a world of deceit, death and power.

When a series of bodies are found around Venice Detective Julia Angetti is called in to put the pieces together but she couldn't anticipate the danger she is about to become embroiled in.

If Professor Barnes doesn't solve the mystery of the stones with help from Julia Angetti his life may be forfeit along with a more catastrophic finale. Can he do it before time runs out?

Power, intrigue, mystery and a dangerous finale contribute to the overall complexion of the book.

 

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I wrote 689 days ago

A brilliant start with a great picture of the line between life and death which immediately iintrigues the reader with great descriptions that flare the reader's imaginations. The storyline is gripping with impressive characters. This is a truly impressive read which I am glad to back. Laurence view book

I wrote 691 days ago

This is a unique concept of hell which could be heavily debated in intellectual circles but would be heavily supressed by most churches as they would no longer have a threat to keep their flocks in line. I like the idea of a correctional hell to get people to heaven. Backed. Could you please have a ... view book

I wrote 695 days ago

Lets say your work is interesting to say the least but i'm not sure whether that is good or bad. Your plot is very original but also very graphic, disturbingly so. My mind is conflicted over your work as I'm slightly worried about how you came up with the characters and the plotline but I also think... view book

I wrote 696 days ago

The first paragraph is so powerful it makes the reader continue, rightfully so. Your work is brilliant with great characters such as jack who is clearly tormented by mental pictures which gives him an excellent depth which reflects the quality of your writing perfectly. I am glad I was able to read ... view book

I wrote 696 days ago

I can't really comment on the plot of your work as I've read it as seperate chapters but what I have read is very good. As requested I've had a look at chapter 19 and have noticed several things which are all fairly small but significant. 1)"Ransom had always been doubted himself"- should be Rans... view book

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