Bob, This is a very interesting, intriguing and action filled story. I love your writing style, although I think you might be a little wordy at times, but that's just me! But I do find your story too good to put down. I zipped through the first few chapters without anything to complain about, so ... view book

This is a wonderful story, but I want more. I love your writing style and how you characterize Jacob right away. The only quibble I might have is that your paragraphs are very long. Perhaps you could break them up a bit. But that's merely an editing suggestion as I have nothing other than good thing... view book

Such an interesting and imaginative tale! I love it. Your writing is great, and very appropriate for a YA audience, not to mention an adult audience :) Read only a few chapters so far, but will keep reading becasue I'm enjoying it so much. Backed. Gail view book

Really enjoying this. Your writing is fabulous and the descriptions, scenes and characterization is well done. Only read a few chapters so far, but will keep reading because I'm loving it. Gail view book

Wow, you hook us in from the very beginning. Very emotional and I love the way you're in Rania's POV, which makes it very gripping. Nicely done. Backed. Gail view book