Wow! You got me. Backed wholeheartedly! Julia view book

Hi, William, You certainly know how to "set the hook"--I will put this on my shelf so that I can come back and read more. My only suggestions would be to shorten your long pitch a bit to really grab the reader's attention and to pare down a little bit of the extraneous information presented in th... view book

Witty and fun--I enjoyed chapter one but must confess, I wasn't completely hooked into the plot--that's just me, personally. I truly thought it was well written and very amusing, just not my cup of tea. I will, however, keep it on my watchlist, because while it's not for me, I think it's got potenti... view book

Hello, Dawn, I was a little hesitant when I read your pitch (I have a sister who "overdosed" on all things horse when we were little), but I'm so glad I went forward. Your first chapter is beautifully written--I couldn't figure how you would be able to capture the moments after the horse's birth,... view book

I had several incisive comments regarding giving away too much in the long pitch--what do you all think about this version? Thank you so much for your comments--I anticipate reciprocating in the weeks to come. Julia view book