Hi Sheryl, I’m a volunteer in a home for abused children. Naturally, your story struck me deep. As an advocate of the supremacy of law, I was shocked at how I follow with fascination your riveting tale of vigilante justice. Your enigmatic characters and their action have me reexamine the plight fa... view book

You have worked hard at the editing. The story flows better now. You still need to tighten up some sentences. But good story. I enjoy it. So backed. Casey view book

I have to read this slowly to appreciate the story. You have a knack at building up the mystery and tension. The characters are lively. Well crafted dialogue. Happy to back this. All the best. Casey view book

Absorbing read. Superb characterization. I'm hooked by each of the well portrayed character. Memorable phrases: ...my bed was cold / financed by a couple of bank robberies for whcih he was never caught / ruled over her staff with an electric cattle prod... there are more, I'd have to download the wh... view book

The notion of a boy on a mission to save his grandpa provides an irresistible read. Jack is a lovable character and his father with all his flaws is likeable. It's every child's dream to be in Jack's shoes to be in command in the battle against the evil. Great stuff for kids, they'd love the story. ... view book