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Kelvin O'Ralph

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about me

I'm a university student in UK, studying Computer Science. I love writing and reader, and one day hopes to become a successful writer. I have published a book on Amazon Kindle, titled, Fast Forward: Into The Future, and it's a Romantic Sci-fi novella set in the UK. Presently, I'm looking to release the first book of my Fantasy series on Amazon Kindle, titled, LS: the beginning set in a fictional city in the USA.

Any picking and comments will be reciprocated. This doesn't mean I'd give you a biased comment because you love my work. I'll be honest, and give constructive criticism(I doubt I'd even criticize)
Also I'd like to thank the people who commented and backed my book. It means a lot I'm here to make friends as well, feel free to send me a message if you'd like to know more about me and my works. My facebook page is listed below, please do check it, and like it :)

favourite books

Harry Potter
twilight
Lord of the Rings
Vampire Diaries
The Bible
On Writiing by Stephen King
Bungalow 2 by Danielle Steel

my websites

http://icire.blogspot.com http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=224541070409

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KirkH wrote 45 days ago

Hi Kelvin, I hope you can get a chance to read parts of my college c....

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Eponymous Rox wrote 172 days ago

Hullo there. I'm still a reader on Authonomy scouting for books to pr....

Clive Eaton wrote 251 days ago

Hello Kelvin For over four millennia the Great Pyramid of Giza has....

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I wrote 343 days ago

Brilliant is the word used to describe this type of writing. You are well informed on your subject, and make your readers sit still - every writers dream. I'm utterly impressed with your work, and I hope to be like you in the future. There wasn't any dialogue in the first chapter, but still I want t... view book

I wrote 494 days ago

Your writing style is AMAZING. However, the starting was a bit dull. You need to start your book with something that would keep the reader's interest. Your dialogue was well written and structured, Really nice work. Backed Kelvin ICIRE The Rebirth view book

I wrote 519 days ago

Hmm a very exciting read. Although, it needs a bit tweaking. For eg. "Lucy Brennan, on holiday with her parents in the land of Egypt comes into possession of an ancient book." There should be a conjunction after this sentence, and a comma to make it clearer. For eg "Lucy Brennan, who's on holiday w... view book

I wrote 523 days ago

Really impressive. It reminds me of Mr and Mrs Smith. i really enjoyed reading the hook of your book, However, I do think it needs a bit tweaking. Your writing is clear and creative. Well done. BACKED Kelvin ICIRE: The Rebirth view book

I wrote 524 days ago

How many days has it been,thought Daniel? The question mark should come before. e.g How many days has it been? Thought David. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also "Daniel asked. "Do you ...." I believe it's meant to be a comma, not a full stop(period). Again correct me if I'm wrong view book

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