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Stephen Andrew

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The first four chapters of the rewrite are up now. More are soon to follow.

p.s. The story is getting bigger and much much better.

A writer. Period. Journalism and English student. Writing and reading and talking about stories is one of my greatest passions.
I try my best to return backings. I comment on what grips me, or when specifically asked for feedback or swaps.

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Harry Potter books by J.K. Rowling
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The Circle Trilogy by Ted Dekker
The Oath by Frank Peretti

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Eragon by Christopher Paolini
Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins
Good Omens by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett

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The Guardians of Ocean City

Stephen Andrew

Taylor sees things - fleeting flashes and shadows in the night - and when she sees them, people die


Taylor Grey lives with her workaholic father in Ocean City, the first city to be rebuilt after a great war that left the world in near ruins. But the city hailed as the future is not as good as it seems. Plagued by mysterious murders and escalating violence, including the violent death of Taylor's sister and disappearance of her mother six months before, the city threatens to fall into the depravity that destroyed it the first time.

As the future continues to fade and a charismatic leader rises, seventeen year-old Taylor leads a sad and dull life alongside her best friend Trevor, until she meets Rogue, a mysterious man who pulls her into a dark and dangerous world where people fly and nothing is as it seems.

Welcome to the world of the Guardians, a world soon to be entwined with Ocean City in a battle for the future.

 

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I wrote 372 days ago

Hey, you have an interesting idea here, and I think it has some definite potential. I thought the diary at the beginning was a very good hook, however I think it needs to be tightened. For instance the language doesn't seem to be consistent. It seems to jump back and forth between intellectual forma... view book

I wrote 552 days ago

Very very impressive MS. And I see why it made it to the desk. You have very tight voice and setting. And I'm sure you really don't need any in-depth things at this point, at least not from me. :) This should be published and I wish you the best on getting it there. Stephen Andrew (The Guardians ... view book

I wrote 554 days ago

I was planning on only setting this on my shelf to get back to later. But the clips of writing within your plot summary were so good, I went ahead and read the first chapter. Very, very good emotive writing. You balance detail and recollection of Dani within the context of the hunt expertly. This is... view book

I wrote 673 days ago

I'm impressed David. And I rarely say that on here. So I do mean that. You have a unique, too-the-point voice to be envied. And you bring a believable child-like innocence to this story. Understatement, I've found, can be infinitely powerful. And you have used it brilliantly here. You're a good writ... view book

I wrote 678 days ago

This is a very good story you have going here. Your knowledge of history is evident, though I don't think I would explain everything, but rather let the stories show a glimpse of the history. There is a lot here. Your dedication is clear. I would encourage you as David Brett did to shorten it. I've ... view book

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