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I'm gone, I'm afraid. I thought I'd have to restrict my time on here, but the past six weeks have shown that I've been too busy to log-on at all.

So thank you to everyone who continued to read and support The Silver Trumpet. I can only apologise for being unable to return the reads I'd promised. I won't delete my profile (because I'm to tech-dumb to see how) or the book (in case that does something funny to people's ratings). And I will attempt to read stuff. But, er, don't hold your breath. Sorry.

And good luck, people.

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The Silver Trumpet

Simon Weir

"You have to go away. Before THEY come." Mysterious notes plunge Penny Oaks into desperate danger as she tries to save two worlds


When Penny Oaks starts receiving notes from a mysterious stranger called Ribaldane, she feels special. Especially as Ribaldane needs her help to find a lost silver trumpet. But then things go wrong...

Penny is plunged into the magical land of the faerie folk - because the silver trumpet is the key to a terrible power that could destroy not only the peaceful folk of the faerie lands, but also the human world.

Sent to recover the silver trumpet, Penny confronts all manner of deadly peril including fearsome mechanical monsters, giant beetles and warlike centaurs. It's down to her to save both the human world and the faerie world - if she can only overcome her fears.


Children's fantasy originally written to help my dyslexic daughter build confidence in reading. Far darker and more complex than other fairyworld stories, it toys with the conventions of the genre.

First of a two-book series, both parts of which are complete.

Aimed at 8-12 year olds (though children of all ages, up to 70, have enjoyed it so far).

I will return-read if you comment on it.

 

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I wrote 903 days ago

Very rapid fly-past: just to thank everyone who's read and commented on the story. I'm talking to a publisher and am now deep into revisions they've requested, with the aim to have a draft with them for the new year. So fingers crossed. Sorry I don't have enough time now to read more - but please ta... view book

I wrote 1017 days ago

Hello Rob I'm struck by the mismatch between concept and delivery. The idea is spot-on and the names have a really good feel - ideal for young boys (six to eight, I'd have said). If you're aiming for an older reader (ten or so) then I think, especially with football, the names are a touch too twe... view book

I wrote 1075 days ago

Hmmm. Notes on the first chapter. First, thing, I guess is the detail. Some are interesting - coke coming in lottery tickets is a nice touch and sounds authentic (how times change) but mostly it's the detail that doesn't ring true that stood out. For instance, cabin crew don't forget to say plea... view book

I wrote 1081 days ago

Very good work. For me the names don't feel quite right, though that's just me being a curmudgeon (maybe it's having a Princess Anne that makes an Annie not seem terribly regal - but none of them really clicked with me). However, that's a minor point. The flow is good, the pace is brisk without bein... view book

I wrote 1082 days ago

Nice work, Marilyn. There's nothing to fault, as such, though you could perhaps tighten it up a bit. I'm attempting to make only supportive comments - but here are a few suggestions for next time you edit. Look at your sentence length and structure - short and simple is best for children's books. Av... view book

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