Great book. Great Cause. Great characters and yes, I would have kicked Greta in the shins too! Backed with pleasure. view book

Hi Ashley, Liked the opening chapter. Wow, Sophie sounds as wound up as me when I was a teenager! Good mix of description and dialogue but you kept the story moving--majorly important i think. And pay no attention to anyone who says markets are saturated. I remember the 80's and the big hot a... view book

Hi, Read the first chapter and I liked it. The frog is a cool guy. He’s chilled and I got that from the description. I don’t agree with previous posts about starting with “conflict” at all. You coloured the character first, and then threw in the conflict and drama with the imp. What I woul... view book

Hi Stuart, Read the first chapters—liked it very much. You’ve a great style and a good grip of enough dialogue to balance the description. So many people throw so much on the page but have no rhythm or plot that makes you interested. You cured this with the opening preface, I was intrigued bec... view book

Hi Read the first four chaps. This is very fast, and I think the chapters would do better being a bit longer. She’s killed, dead, learns she’s dead, all in the matter a of a few paragraphs. I think you need to slow it a bit to give the character and the reader time to emotionally deal with he... view book