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Your book is very well written. But I do have some advice try making the summary a little less complicated try re-wording it to make it easier to read and understand. I found that it didnt really show off the true essence of your book. But dont worry I found myself in the same problem. But other tha... view book
Hey Al, I read your first chapter and it was very clever and very well written. But some of the dialog seemed a little unnecessary. I ran into the same problem myself. Try making the dialog less complicated and easier to read so your readers can connect better to the characters. All and all very wor... view book