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I live with my wife in Manitoba, Canada. I read a lot and I'm afraid of the dark. It is strange, even to me, that I would be drawn to works of horror. I began writing about twenty years ago but this is the first serious attempt at getting published.

I like suspence, horror, crime and then historical non-fiction.
Hopefully, I can get some useful criticism from others on this site and use what I learn here to make what I write a better read. The books I've uploaded are Jack, I Am and They. Both are complete but under revision. Definitely give me your thoughts on both books and I'm very willing to read other peoples' work as well. Don't bother spamming me because I'll ignore you, If your book falls within the perameters above I'll look at it but otherwise you are wasting your time and mine. Thank you all.

Book cover art for Jack, I Am expertly done by Bradley Wind.

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Michael Crichton
Clive Cussler
Stephen King
Tom Clancy
Herbert Crowder
Robert Ludlum
Phillip Margolin
Ken Follett

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Rick Carter-Squire

The woods around Blaine Nebraska have been silent and asleep for hundreds of years but now they're awake and hungry.


Ray Jacobs is pitted against the evil that has awakened. He has help in the form of the town doctor, his girlfriend and the local Sheriff but their foe is a shape shifter, cunning and ruthless. There will be no prisoners as they battle for their own survival and perhaps the fate of the entire country. Ray was spared once long ago but there will be no pity this time.

 

Jack, I Am

Rick Carter-Squire

Abandoned by his father, mentally and physically abused by his prostitute mother, – he seeks refuge at sea.


John returns to Whitechapel a grown man. Solitary, naïve about women, he begins to see only the dark and seamy side of his surroundings. The one bright spot in his gloomy existence is Kate - an equally naive barmaid. For different reasons, they plunge into marriage. Shattered when she leaves, he concocts a deadly plan to bring her back by using his only skill. The memory of his mother haunts the faces of each victim, until the last.

 

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I wrote 18 days ago

Hi Alan, This is an HCG review. Everything I say here is based on years of reading horror stories. Some start with a bang, others take their time getting to the good parts. So far in the first 3 chapters, you've managed to build a story in the middle of the road. A seance by its very nature, is a po... view book

I wrote 27 days ago

Hi James, this is an HCG review of your book Bite Mark. I'm not an expert at these things so accept the fact that I'm giving you a readers' opinion rather than those of an English Professor. That said, I was expecting something a little less formal for a reading style from a book written for Young A... view book

I wrote 33 days ago

Hi Aidan, for me, the whole first chapter is a cliche. By that I mean the situation and the characters have been seen before. I'll change the first paragraph and you can see what I mean. I hope. The old woman stopped, the shopping bag slipped from her grasp. Heat shimmered off the pavement and th... view book

I wrote 34 days ago

Hi Aidan. This is how you might change the second chapter to first person. It gives the scene a different feel that I think might work better. Orange light cavorts across my closed eye lids. The scent of incense mixed with damp assails my nose. Heavy footsteps echo, I must be in a large space. ... view book

I wrote 34 days ago

Hi Aidan. This is a HCG review of Spawn of Lilith. The story is solid and pulls the reader along. I'm not an expert and unless everybody else says the same thing, please feel free to ignore what I say here. I'm not interested in puntuation mistakes so I don't mention them unless they spoil the flow ... view book

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