Cormac Your book was “pitch me”ed about 3 weeks ago and I took it out of interest because your pitch was interesting. I read a few chapters and I was going to comment but I saw that you hadn’t logged on in weeks so I left it. Now I see that you are back. So, forgive me, this feedback is based on ... view book

Rachel I’ve read the first 5 chapters of ‘Going Twice’ and I made some running notes: General I noticed quite a few cut-up sentences e.g. “They’ve gotten worse. More frequent. More detailed.’ And ‘The sheets untouched on his side.’ Using this to compliment the 1st person narrative and conv... view book

It's so confusing - Carry Me Away is too slow and immediate yet this book is too descriptive and slow-burning. I guess all editors are human and all reviews are subjective. I'm glad to see advocacy for the old 3rd person. Congrats on what is still a hugely positive review. It's a huge achievement to... view book

Hi Crispy. A warning. I dipped directly into Chapter 13. Some Notes: In Sci-Fi, they say, don’t emphasise the fantastic, make it mundane. Hence I would drop the quotations around Vegyburger and things like that. Make all facets of your strange world normal to the reader by not showing them ... view book

Clare I have read three chapters to date. All characters are very sympathetic and the multiple POV structure makes it easy to follow the events and opinions of people. I'm hoping to see more of Catherine's backstory in later chapters and I'll be interested to see how it you work it into the story (... view book