A mystical injection, reminiscent of Lord of the Rings. After reading 'suddenly found himself surrounded by magical creatures' I expected to be repelled by a world of cliches, but in fact it works, it's imaginative and it's enjoyable. Backed. Luke view book

Hi Alice. Here are some thoughts on the first three chapters Chapter 1: ‘How strange’ repeated There is a fair amount of questions, but little action. Maybe a flash back of a significant event would pick up the pace. Do we need the information about the estate agent – something more ent... view book

Rachel, I am drawn to the book because of the intensity of the protagonist's feeling for herself. Your method of balancing the past with the present is smooth and works well. Three chapters in and we are introduced to a number of complex issues, substantiating the character and her story. I feel you... view book

Hi. I read the prologue and two chapters and have some criticism I hope you will find constructive. Writing should be honest, and I would welcome your thoughts on Sherwyn Revisited. The prologue brings the reader in the gently with some mild motion and gentle pace. Sometimes the language seems a ... view book

With a story set in a jungle it's always going to be difficult to dodge all that green and get out of the canopy to look down into the characters' realm. In the first three chapters, you invite the reader hospitably with movement and dialogue that don't aim for the invisible stars. The idea of The G... view book