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I'm back up there, having made a good choice of "Burnt Ochre" when it was at 4000+. My latest pick "Above Us The Stars" is in the same position, but I have backed it from a TSR of 4. I do not rotate my shelf often, and it will be there for a while. So jump on the bandwagon authonomy!

If anyone wants to read my book to the end of the extract here and COMMENT, I'd be happy to reciprocate. My back is feeling scratchy! LOL

NB. I really do mean *to the end* of my extract. If I back anything, I will *always* have read *all* of it and will have left a comprehensive critique. I expect the same in return. Just check-out my critiques is you are in ay doubt.

I HAVE JUST TAKEN THE LAST HALF OF THIS DOWN AS PUBLICATION APPROACHES. Further deletions will have to follow, once review copies go out.

Serious reviewers can still email me for the rest, as I still welcome and value comments on the ending. Thanks.

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Bokassa's Last Apostle

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Can Everton Jones discover how his father stole Emperor Bokassa's diamonds and where he hid them, before the world and his brother get there first?


Everton Jones is in London to see James Stevens, his father’s solicitor. A father who disappeared nineteen years ago. But not before leaving $300,000 in cash and an envelope addressed to Everton hidden in a bank box. The envelope contains a diamond ring, once owned by Emperor Bokassa, and a grigri, an African charm to protect him from demons. James Stevens neglects to tell him about the money.

When it comes to light that Everton’s father is wanted by the Central African Government for stealing a fortune in diamonds, James comes clean and, along with a growing cast of colourful new friends, Everton romps through the London gay scene trying to uncover his father’s past as one of Bokassa’s henchmen (his “Apostles”), how he stole the diamonds and where he hid them.

Word gets out that Everton’s father had a son, and the world and his brother come calling, MI6, the French DGSE, the Central African Government and all the remaining Apostles. The latter get tangled in a gang war and start getting themselves killed.

Can Everton outlive them, to become the Last Apostle and inherit the fortune hidden by Bokassa twenty six years earlier?

 

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I wrote 67 days ago

I like this. The manuscript has been recently uploaded and needs further work, but I think it will fare well on authonomy. The narration is very old-fashioned, and oddly appropriate for historical fiction. Pacing is slow, yet you get your story in and include loads of detail. Crucially, you have tha... view book

I wrote 94 days ago

Well, this is a very commercial prospect. Although probably as an e-book. And you've got loads of tension going on there. I have some tiny niggles, but then this is a very early draft, I hear. At least it passed the most important test for me... Not what I'd normally read, but I'd probably load it o... view book

I wrote 194 days ago

Very muscular writing. I agree with others, a strong narrative voice--which I envy. One comment I read and agree with: nothing much happens in three chapters. Hmm. I think Don Quixote in the pitch is the key here. Reads like a distopic road movie, almost, but not quite stream of consciousness. The c... view book

I wrote 216 days ago

I like the concept for this, and I can see how it would appeal to today’s youth. And you get right down to brass tacks in the first short chapter. My issue is with the very first few words, the most important ones of the book. Your opening, for me, lacks “punch”. If the essay title is meant to be... view book

I wrote 295 days ago

[shelved 19/4] This is witty, ascerfbic, zany, almost stream of consciousness in places and reminds me of William Burroughs stuck back together. Which is apposite, considering that I'm reading this in Morocco at the moment. "HHOOHH" "who?" fantsatic! And the scene with the coffee after he's reali... view book

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